[200WILLIAM-EC SP67851] Fwd: Draft Submission 2 - for review

Thu May 11 18:24:48 AEST 2023

Thank you. Yes, I know it looks really bossy. The way it works now is that the officer will read in full (with highlighted points as ‘highlights’) and various other supervisors and panels in Council and at decision may skim so this is the reason for those – get those punchy points out. 

However - I am more than happy for the advice though as to this and which highlight points to convey.

Thanks all for reading. N

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Subject: Re: [200WILLIAM-EC SP67851] Fwd: Draft Submission 2 - for review

Hello Natalie and Matt,

I have just completed reading through the second draft and think it is really excellent. I do prefer to stay with the underlining and the bold letters because one's eye is drawn to that copy and it is easier for the people in council to read. So, let's stay with that please Natalie.

Best wishes and thank you for such great work Natalie.

Craig

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Re: [200WILLIAM-EC SP67851] Fwd: Draft Submission 2 - for review

Thank you. 

I am happy to take it off (bold and so forth) but I do this in case panels in the future skim read (to see quick highlight points) and because it is so lengthy. Good to have feedback so if you want me to tone that down I can. 

Thank you, Natalie 

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Subject: Re: [200WILLIAM-EC SP67851] Fwd: Draft Submission 2 - for review

Hi Craig/Natalie,

 That looks very thorougher. From my perspective it's a bit hard on the eyes with all that bold and underlining but I guess that's the point in these cases. Thanks for your work here Natalie it has my approval. 

Kind regards

Matt

On 11/5/2023 3:26 am, Craig Laforest wrote:

Good afternoon, 

I have received the following second complaint draft from Natalie. Please review the doc and if you have any further comments to be included, please email her direct with all EC members included in your email.

Thank you and regards,

Craig

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Draft Submission 2 - for review

Hi Craig, I hope you are travelling well?

Please find the draft attached. 

Did you want me to send it to others?

This is due Friday if you have a chance to review.

A few things to note:

I have updated discussion to address new documents.

I have put lots of bold and underline to draw attention to key points for any eventual skim readers (eg to remind any panels of highlight issues)

I will be attaching our original view assessment once again, even though they already have it to make the point again about the views not being assessed.

There is a rebranded mixed use (employment focussed) zone as of the other week - so I have updated this and we have a few new handy objectives to rely on there as this is a residentially focussed development.

Thanks and let me know your thoughts when you can.

Regards, Natalie 

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